Living In Fear

Hey guys, check out what I wrote to the skool..


RE:
Dear Sir/Mdm,
9th January 2012
Good day to you. I, Angeline Chong, Student Council of the school write this letter on behalf of the students. It has come to our attention that sugary drinks are no longer to be sold or consumed on campus.
There has been discussion raised among the students. The banning of sugary drinks has become an issue to most of the students. Students tend to partial the lesson and reason given that they were tired and unable to focus on lesson. Some says that they are over stress and there were no other options available for them to distress. Students were also late from their breaks and left their assigned task incomplete for buying sugary drinks outside from school. The students criticize about the school towards their friends and family which in return will bring down the school reputation.
We are glad that the school is concern about the health of the students and we appreciate the thoughts and effort of the school. Nonetheless, we also hope that the school would reconsider with the banning of the sugary drinks because it benefits the student’s ability to perform well and pay attention in class indirectly. Examples of sugary drinks that help in students’ performance are Redbull, 100plus, NaughtyG. These are energy drinks that keep students awake and stay focus in class.
We seek for your kindest understanding and soonest reply from the school.

Yours Sincerely,
Angeline Chong
President of Student Council
Republic Polytechnic
Student ID: 123456
Email: 123456@myrp.edu.sg
Contact No: 99581234